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When It all began it was I, who lent a hand, you wanted to fall, I built you up, you wanted to fly, well, tough luck, In between, you began to change, your walls grew strong, you were unafraid, a passion that far excited mine, as I began to lag behind, You strung me along, but I began to see, you no longer needed me, as time moves on I will fade but the memories we've shared they'll give you wings so you can fly away and become something don't weep for me because it was my pleasure to sow in every delicate feather change your life be a guiding light lend others a hand as I gave mine time is relative, for friends such as we, I succeed as you fulfill your destiny, you will forever be, a part of me, so be happy, be healthy, but most of all, be free,

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Date: 6/19/2013 1:56:00 PM
your poem is pretty Kayla, . Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully you find this place to be the comfort zone your pen is looking for. If you ever need or seek feedback on a certain poem, click on my name any time you like. I’m looking forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy this community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend Linda
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Date: 6/19/2013 8:18:00 AM
Hi Kayla, wow! very sweet, and the feelings you compose with your light and love. enjoyed, Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 6/19/2013 5:21:00 AM
Hey, Kayla ! - Pleased to read your first poem in the P-Soup! - You write very well. - Welcome to P-Soup, hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your thoughts and words here with us :) - Here it is: give to get, comments - then you will get feedback on your writing - I love get feedback on what I write. - Wish you luck my "new friend" - Have fun with poetry! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/18/2013 10:18:00 AM
A warm welcome to Poetry Soup Kayla...this is a very touching write to your loved one. I can only envision what its like to have children and watched them grow. I love every word of this piece.. It speaks of pure wisdom...enjoyed!! Regards INK-U-SCRIPT
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