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*Scene is set * romance in the air picnic in the forest glen champagne is on ice **Anticipation** question to ask her wild willows bend to listen by the babbling brook ***Be mine*** red rose in my hand on bended knee I propose will you marry me? 02~02~15 Contest Double Valentine Haiku + Questionku#2 PD ~awarded 7th place~

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/26/2015 5:42:00 PM

Congrat on your winning work..Way to go..Lovely photo for your inspiration..Sara

Jan Allison
Date: 3/26/2015 5:45:00 PM

Thanks Sara:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/24/2015 6:32:00 PM

way to go, Jan. It's fun seeing all the winners. Congrats to you, my friend.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/24/2015 6:46:00 PM

Thanks Andrea:-) Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 3/22/2015 2:55:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Jan. I must have missed this one before! It is very creative; from the male point of view...according to the picture! Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 3/23/2015 12:46:00 PM

Thanks for dropping by Paul:-) Hugs jan xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/22/2015 1:46:00 PM

JAN, Congratulations on your awesome win. Thank you for supporting my contest. Stop by my latest blog "it's never too late, PUPPY LOVE" if you'd like. Enjoy your late valentine win, -Valentines field forever- LOVE LINDA

Jan Allison
Date: 3/23/2015 12:45:00 PM

Thanks Linda:-) Hugs Jan xx

Jaafar Sadig El Waad

Date: 2/23/2015 4:38:00 AM

very nice culture. it's nice stopping by

Jan Allison
Date: 2/23/2015 5:30:00 AM

Thanks for the lovely comment Jaafar:-) hugs jan xx

Funom Makama

Date: 2/6/2015 7:34:00 AM

A lovely piece well penned down. Nothing short of a 7 is what it deserves. Its nice stopping by

Jan Allison
Date: 2/6/2015 9:36:00 AM

Thank you so much for the lovely comment and rating:-) Hugs Jan xx

M. L. Kiser

Date: 2/5/2015 2:49:00 PM

Beautifully penned. I'm am certain that the answer was, "yes".

Jan Allison
Date: 2/5/2015 4:45:00 PM

Thanks so much ML:-) Hugs jan xxx

James Fraser

Date: 2/4/2015 4:44:00 PM

Just delightful Jan, oh to be in such a scene, hugs, James xx

Jan Allison
Date: 2/4/2015 4:51:00 PM

It is purely a fiction write - never happened for me James - I proposed to my hubby - and for some reason he said YES - will have been married 24 yrs in June:-) hugs Jan xx

Eileen Manassian

Date: 2/4/2015 12:32:00 PM

Lovely, Jan. You are such a great write, dear. :) Good luck in the contest. Hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 2/4/2015 4:48:00 PM

Thanks so much Eileen for your continued support:-) Hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/3/2015 6:24:00 PM

cute and romantic idea, dear Jan! Boy, I need to get busy on these new contests before they all fill up.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/3/2015 6:27:00 PM

There are some tough challenges for us Andrea:-) Hugs jan xx

Jack Horne

Date: 2/3/2015 3:12:00 PM

awww, very romantic

Jan Allison
Date: 2/3/2015 3:14:00 PM

Thanks so much Jack for your continued support:-) Hugs Jan xx

David Meade

Date: 2/2/2015 6:10:00 PM

Old man willow is going to break a branch if the answer does not come quickly!! Lovely dear Jan!! 7

Jan Allison
Date: 2/3/2015 1:16:00 AM

Thanks David:-) Hugs jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 2/2/2015 6:00:00 PM

So beautiful...A dream scene....hugs Tim

Jan Allison
Date: 2/2/2015 6:03:00 PM

Thanks Tim:-) Hugs Jan xx

Shane Cooper

Date: 2/2/2015 5:25:00 PM

Another gem you have produced my friend. i am sure you will do well in the competition. i really life the Haiku form so simple and yet so elegant, it suits the scene of a marrage proposal perfectly. Love Shane

Jan Allison
Date: 2/2/2015 6:06:00 PM

my PM was gifted to me it expires in March I am in 2 minds about renewing it I have issues with the site that despite 4 mails to TPS are not resolved in fact haven't even been answered. Dad is fading:-( thanks for asking:-) hugs jan x

Jan Allison
Date: 2/2/2015 5:42:00 PM

Thanks so much Shane - I just write and hope with the contests i have 15 N/A's on my current page lol guess you cant win them all. Today is my 1 yr anniversary here! wow what a journey!!! Hugs jan x