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Bb's Rattle

BB's really rattle in the shell Of a container,loose like bell Clapper, hanging free to ding Ideas rattle in poet's brain to ring The audience, and awake from sleep Oh! Into a new dimension of deep Thoughts, understanding of heights above The ordinary, into a new realm of love (truth) (Thank you Lord for your blesssings on me.)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/3/2009 12:59:00 AM
Very nicely written, Sara! Keep your pen flowing. Kind regards, Gert
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Date: 11/2/2009 10:11:00 PM
omg Sara, this is wonderful! I love it and it flows with brilliance. :) Thank you for your visit and kind comments, I've edited Mustard Seeds... if you have a chance would love to know your thoughts. Many hugs :)
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Date: 11/2/2009 2:40:00 PM
Nice poem, enjoyed reading this. Pam.
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Date: 11/2/2009 2:36:00 PM
Beautiful, Sara, excellent write.. and your message and footnote... we should all thank the Lord each day for His Blessings on us all... thankxxx Linda-Marie
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Date: 11/2/2009 2:31:00 PM
rattle on, bb brain-just kidding, mom-love you!
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Date: 11/2/2009 12:54:00 PM
I really like to comparison of the BBs rattling in a shell to the ideas that rattle in a poet's brain. Very clever, Sara! Love, Carolyn
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