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Bayonet, Combat, Boots

On a battlefield so far away, those marching soldiers never play, all scanning the horizon, a target in question, freedom defender, with their rifle, bayonet, combat boots.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/17/2012 9:49:00 AM
Hi Richard! I enjoyed reading your poem. This isn't an acrostic, though. I believe it's a nonet. I hope you don't mind me pointing this out. I just thought you should know. Check out the forms section on this site. Looking forward to reading more of your work. Love, Kim
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Richard Mcclellan
Date: 3/18/2012 7:14:00 AM
Thanks Kim, I submitted two poems and had the verse's swapped by mistake. Thanks so much for pointing it out. lol Its fixed now. I will read some of your stuff soon my friend...

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