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Bayonet, Combat, Boots

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Below is the poem entitled Bayonet, Combat, Boots which was written by poet Richard McClellan. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Bayonet, Combat, Boots

On a battlefield so far away,
those marching soldiers never play,
all scanning the horizon,
a target in question,
freedom defender,
with their rifle,

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  1. Date: 3/17/2012 9:49:00 AM
    Hi Richard! I enjoyed reading your poem. This isn't an acrostic, though. I believe it's a nonet. I hope you don't mind me pointing this out. I just thought you should know. Check out the forms section on this site. Looking forward to reading more of your work. Love, Kim

    McClellan Avatar Richard McClellan
    Date: 3/18/2012 7:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Kim, I submitted two poems and had the verse's swapped by mistake. Thanks so much for pointing it out. lol Its fixed now. I will read some of your stuff soon my friend...
  1. Date: 3/17/2012 7:07:00 AM
    I think it might read a little better without the comma after combat. It is an excellent little poem. Whoah! Hugs, catie :)

    McClellan Avatar Richard McClellan
    Date: 3/17/2012 9:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I totally concur... I changed it, thank you Catie. I will read some of yours later this weekend... Have a good day! Regards, Richard