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Bathing Beauties

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Bathing Beauties

~The wave breaks gently, caressing over and over it strokes the rocky shore. The shore trembles wet ready silvery but mute. The storm glowers angering the sea: back-talk leads to back hands, and the shore maudlin retreats.~ Large ~ boulders break with the tides of time, to slivered shards all glistening wet. golden in a new dawn once whole now broken by the tide still there's beauty, yet.~
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  1. Date: 2/4/2014 11:36:00 PM
    Your words described the accompanying picture quite well. Light and love to you as well, Debbie!

  1. Date: 2/4/2014 6:50:00 PM
    Love the use of your imagination, it explodes with the power of the sea and it's wonderment. Nature at it's raw force unleased, great job. This write shines with a brilliance all it's own, loved every line and word expression. cheri thank you also for your review of yellow.

  1. Date: 1/17/2014 8:03:00 PM
    Beautiful imagery, Debbie. Thanks for participating in the Kintsukuroi contest!

  1. Date: 1/12/2014 6:25:00 PM
    Enjoyed the metaphors and imagery here Debbie; this shows out well on various levels the sort of write that really appeals to me..'

  1. Date: 1/2/2014 5:43:00 PM
    Enjoyed your poem and its picture this evening Debbie...I felt an intermix of human emotions in there...awesome

  1. Date: 12/31/2013 7:04:00 PM
    Nicely done Debbie well done. take care. Pete.

  1. Date: 12/31/2013 5:42:00 PM
    well penned Debbie..I liked the transition from gentleness to the storm to the beauty of the broken pieces at storms end..hugs

  1. Date: 12/31/2013 7:03:00 AM
    Love the yin-yang of the breaking waves...metaphor galore....nice! Jim

  1. Date: 12/30/2013 7:32:00 PM
    Nice form and content my dear, enjoyed reading your verse tonight xxx