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Barren Roads

I Love the barren roads to see, That’s take me where I cannot see, Where the beauty of the nature relaxed me, Until I reach the softly rounded hills, I hear the whistling of the winds. I want to be here until the end, The beauty of the nature guards so well, I want lots of time to spend, To lift the ocean shells. To harsh to bear in gentle spring, It makes the cherry blossom to sing, I love how freely that the leaves dance, As free as a bright bird high on wings. I Love the barren roads to see, That’s take me where I cannot see, In the nature, I felt truly free, As free as the nature surrounds me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/7/2015 6:33:00 AM
You have penned a very pleasant read, but this is no Haibun, let alone a Haibun FreeStyle, and that is the contest that you entered it into. Thanks for bringing this piece to my attention, as I drive many barren roads myself, I know the freedom that you speak of; but this poem will not be making it to the second round.
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Date: 11/29/2015 10:51:00 PM
Hi Khalid, this is such an excellent first posting that I enjoyed reading! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7! Pandita
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Date: 11/29/2015 10:02:00 PM
Hi Khalid, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 11/28/2015 1:57:00 PM
Khalid, a beautiful feeling and poem. Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 11/28/2015 2:10:00 AM
this poem describes the nature very well
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