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A barefoot lad, in blue overalls, laying in a meadow of green growing clover appearing to slumber, His green Irish hat lies over his face under the shadow of a willow. A pot of fantasy Irish gold sits by his shoulder. In whisper snore, and relationship with nature’s warmth fellowship And wondering thoughts of plunder A poetic vision in the figure of an Irish rover, A high boisterous fun with mischief of sin feeling the senses of lilt rhythm within, music, song, scenery, and good weather He steals a look at the stars carrying in the day and a benediction it finds. The harmony of being together, a meeting of the minds, an instinct that is stronger than his upbringing. What came, that which is unseen on our island home before For a flavor of a rainbow and a mystical Leprechaun and blame the thrill to the eyes. And plunder his gold and hope he won't reclaim Triumph on the lore of his essence of identity and not blarney Irish folklore
8/27/2016 Five Rhyming Stanza's - 5 only - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Broken Wings abba rhyme scheme

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Date: 8/29/2016 4:39:00 PM
Eve, oh what a delightful write, congratulations on your win in my contest and I loved your image too ~
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Date: 8/29/2016 4:13:00 PM
Your fantasy and imagination have served you well, Eve. I truly enjoyed reading about this barefoot Irish lad. ~ Congratulations on your high flying win, Eve. Hugs // paul
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Date: 8/29/2016 2:03:00 PM
Oh, Eve - I enjoyed my romp through your lovely poem ... CayCay
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Date: 8/29/2016 12:15:00 PM
Hi Eve, What a delightful tale. Congratulations on your 2nd place win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Date: 8/28/2016 2:38:00 PM
- A really lovely story, Eve - I enjoy reading it :) - A wonderful rhyming - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Eve Roper
Date: 8/29/2016 9:20:00 AM
Thank you,Anne Lise. Hugs Eve
Date: 8/28/2016 2:21:00 PM
what a splendid story, eve... much enjoyed!..huggs
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Eve Roper
Date: 8/29/2016 9:21:00 AM
Thank you, Nette, Hugs Eve
Date: 8/28/2016 2:05:00 AM
Lovely piece, Eve,I enjoyed it muchly. Viv x
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Eve Roper
Date: 8/29/2016 9:22:00 AM
Thank you, Viv, Hugs Eve
Date: 8/28/2016 1:37:00 AM
Simply beautiful. Good luck.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 8/29/2016 4:52:00 PM
wonderful story...
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Eve Roper
Date: 8/29/2016 9:21:00 AM
Thank you, Pashang, Hugs Eve
Date: 8/27/2016 10:08:00 PM
Fun read Mrs Eve. Leprechaun indeed! Lol You have a wonderful imagination!
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Date: 8/29/2016 9:23:00 AM
Thank you, Daniel. Hugs Eve
Date: 8/27/2016 1:10:00 PM
Ah...tremendous write dear Eve,,,,good luck to you in the contest
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Eve Roper
Date: 8/27/2016 8:56:00 PM
Thank you, Tim, so much. Hugs Eve
Date: 8/27/2016 5:32:00 AM
Mind blowing grandeur of images ... fantastic ... all the best ...
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Eve Roper
Date: 8/27/2016 8:58:00 PM
Thank you, Probir, fell in love with the photo and just had to imagine his thoughts and place them on paper. Hugs Eve

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