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BAR GIRL

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BAR GIRL

BAR GIRL
LADY I TALKED TO
CAME OUT TO BE A
BAR GIRL.
AND I FELT  GREAT  TO 
TALK TO THAT GIRL.

'COZ SHE HAD THE  QUALITY 
OF TRUE SUPER -NATURAL
BEING ON EARTH.
TO ACCEPT ON EARTH
WHAT YOU DO IN 
THIS FAKE WORLD.
IS THE BIGGEST  THINGS 
TO ACCEPT SO.

 SHE HAS A PURE HEART 
WHICH WILL TAKE 
HER TO SANITY,
WITH INNER PEACE SHE  HAS.

I WAS BRUISED AND BATTERED,
WITH PEOPLE OF DUAL NATURE .
BUT SHE HAD PURE HEART AND 
IDENTITY OF HER OWN.
TO MEET SUCH A PURE SOUL IN
THIS FAKE WORLD
IS GREAT THING TO MEET 
SUCH A SOUL.

ALTHOUGH SHE IS A BAR GIRL.
SHE HAD LOT TO TEACH 
TO THE WORLD.
ON HOW TO BE TRUE TO 
THE WORLD.

SHE IS A BAR GIRL.
I FELT GREAT TO TALK 
TO THAT  GIRL.
AS SHE WAS TOO SOOTHING 
FOR MY SOUL.
THE LOVE SHE BESTOWED 
UPON ME,
WITH TOUCH 
OF HER.
IS HOLIEST OF TOUCH TO FEEL.

IT WAS SABBATICAL TO MEET 
SUCH A SOUL.
AND YOU CAN REACH 
SANITY AFTER 
MEETING SUCH A SOUL.
EVEN THE LADY WAS 
BAR GIRL.
I FELT GREAT TO  TALK 
TO HER.


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  1. Date: 1/28/2011 11:45:00 PM
    This poem sends a messege that can not be repeated enough. That one's station in life does not determine thier true worth. Well done!!!

  1. Date: 11/10/2010 6:32:00 AM
    What a wonderful character you have created out of the Bar Girl with pure heart and something to teach, Saurabh

  1. Date: 11/10/2010 4:24:00 AM
    your words have inspired me-i loved this