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Banshee Crow

At first I thought it was the gales That howled into the night, But then the banshee's keening wails Broke all the glass in sight I hopped from bed up to the sill To see what I could see I saw a crow upon the hill A dark monstrosity My throat closed up; I couldn't breathe I thought that I would die But it flew out towards the sea - Across the moonlit sky But then the worry came again Which nobel love would die? Me, M’Lady,M’Lord, and when? Which one did Death espy? I bit my nails; I cracked my wrists The fear was like a wrench It smashed into my heart like fists, And kept me in suspense It was three days of agony Till I found out M’Lord had died - My sailor son in Tripoli, Was killed in cannon fight I guess I don't get WHY the crow Gave his warning to me Why screech of death at my window, Instead of Tripoli? Instead of Tripoli? (Besides being a woman, the banshee can take the form of animals, such as the crow) Received 1st place in "Creepy Irish Creatures" contest

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Date: 2/7/2013 10:36:00 AM
yup just like them...PD
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Date: 10/29/2011 3:02:00 PM
Congratulations on this wonderful poem. Tony
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Date: 10/27/2011 4:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your big win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/27/2011 10:17:00 AM
Congrats Susan on a big first place win luv...
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Date: 10/27/2011 9:39:00 AM
Susan, congratulations on your worthy first place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 10/27/2011 8:26:00 AM
I love this original take on the contest, Susan - I find all the different legends fascinating and didn't know that about the banshee. Great stuff!
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Date: 10/27/2011 5:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Debbie's "Creepy Irish Creatures" contest Susan. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/26/2011 9:39:00 PM
Great rhythm throughout this tale of warning. I love the suspense . Well done Susan... cheers Margaret
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Date: 10/26/2011 5:25:00 PM
Sue worked very hard at this fine write..she's a real CHAMP ..big congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 10/26/2011 3:34:00 PM
I love all the physical symptoms of fear...that's great writing. Congrats on this difficult contest win! Awesome. You are still the couplet queen to me! ha . Gwendolen
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Date: 10/26/2011 2:02:00 PM
WAY TO GO!!!!! Just peeking in, can't stay long at all! Congrats. I am proud of you!
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Date: 10/21/2011 10:56:00 AM
wow, I don't know how i missed this one before, Susan. you did a really good job with it. I sure hope it ranks!! How are you today? I am enjoying my time here at Soup while hubbie is out job hunting. maybe my last chance for the day! Hope to see you posting your new poems soon. Luv, Andrea
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