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BAIT, 1986

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BAIT, 1986

He believes I am nude         

                                under him

because porcelain skin
has been stippled by      
the coarse, the terse 
the masculine

new lipstick smeared             
perfume chased 
by crude moves
best dress , a silk puddle                

                                in the corner
pretty lace — 


the sheets ripple as hips     
                                 and release

There was a conversation 
we were meant to have
that I now hold with myself
of Northern lights 
over Muskoka skies,
a café I just found with jazzy chairs,
that silent flick festival next week,
the history of the pendant I wear,
books, music

Small talk, mind wandering 
as he


roughly, blindly
                                      the big man
There will be no other date
my choice, not his
for he believes I am nude 

                                       under him
But I am 
wrapped in a delicate encasement 
of invisible gold,
Aphrodite’s magic veil,
a garment of indestructible gossamer, 
and this sheer rapture
                                        a fool will never penetrate.

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  1. Date: 5/12/2015 2:51:00 PM
    This is beautiful. I have also written poems about my own assault. It's like Jung said, when we write something down it is no longer part of us- rather, an entity all on its own. The best way to fight back is ALWAYS to speak up and give a voice and hope to the survivors too scared to come to the surface. We write for them more than ourselves.

  1. Date: 6/7/2013 2:55:00 PM
    Honestly I've never seen someone write like you.You have a unique style my friend.

  1. Date: 6/7/2013 2:49:00 PM
    Yup yup, I see what you mean, hmm, the spacing doesn't add to the tension, I don't care for it, jagged and irregular spacing would be more on topic? line 1 [naked] is much more visceral, hmmm you are the fish/ the bait in HIS mind...oh how I hate men who use this reference! GAh!

    Guzzi Avatar Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 6/7/2013 2:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    throw in some real fishing terms hon, I'd like to see you make it were the one that got away and when he left he was still a hungry loser. Okies I'll stop ranting. SMOOCH Light & Love
  1. Date: 6/5/2013 7:48:00 PM
    I rather like this unique style of poetry Cyndi, well done xxx