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Love has been over-written There is not much left for me. Even so, as I fall asleep I try to write a romance On your back, in circles. My feet between your sleeping legs, I keep quiet to keep you near. I want to super glue your lips to mine, To be held until we are faultless. I am tired of loving vulgarly More, most, insatiable; Common notions in my head. I am tired of the bad poetry That is loving you.

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Date: 12/7/2011 10:56:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your excellent poetry today and hope to be back soon to read more Elinor. This time of year we all are so busy and I for one don't have a lot of time right now but I will try. I love reading the poetry of the many talented poets here at the Soup. Hope to be reading your poetry for many more years to come. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us and may you always find the inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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