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Bad Morning,Good Morning

I got up late and felt so tired; I rued the day that I'd been hired. But all was well: "Day off," I said, and laughing loud, returned to bed... for Sara's 'Morning' contest

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/4/2016 3:55:00 PM

oh I HAD seen it before. WAs just checking down below. I did not remember seeing it so I think I liked it better the second time around!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/4/2016 3:54:00 PM

hahaha. THis IS AWESOME and I see it won, so big congrats to YOU

Ralph Sergi

Date: 3/25/2016 7:18:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Jack.

Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/23/2016 9:20:00 PM

Hi Jack, Congratulations on your win in the contest....Vlad.

Carlene Simpson

Date: 3/23/2016 8:51:00 PM

Sounds much like me too :-)....Congrats Jack

Susan Gentry

Date: 3/23/2016 3:09:00 PM

Congratulations on your win! Made me smile.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/22/2016 9:25:00 PM

Jack, boy you nailed this with just a few well chosen words. Congratulations on your number two placement Jack! Bravo! ; )

Brian Mcclain

Date: 3/22/2016 5:10:00 PM

Hi Jack, Nice! "I got up late and felt so tired; I rued the day that I'd been hired"--I'm hailing that as an instant classic. Congrats on your well-earned win. Cheers, Brian

Charlie Smith

Date: 3/22/2016 1:04:00 PM

Congratulation Jack, well done...

Lin Lane

Date: 3/22/2016 12:30:00 PM

Very nice humorous write, Jack. Congrats.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/22/2016 11:51:00 AM

Your poem was delightful so glad that you had a good day after “It Was One Of Those Mornings” that really wasn’t awesome.. Congratulations on your placement..Sara

Eve Roper

Date: 3/22/2016 11:43:00 AM

Congratulations on your win!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 3/22/2016 9:05:00 AM

Nicely done poem with a lot of wit:) Congratulations on your 2nd place win in the morning contest:)

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/15/2016 6:22:00 AM

Such a witty entry Jack ;) Wishing you the best for the contest my friend.. liefde W

Constance La France

Date: 3/14/2016 4:40:00 PM

Jack, I love this, just like you to drop in leave a gem and leave again, wonderful 7 and best of luck in the contest.

Paul Callus

Date: 3/14/2016 3:25:00 AM

Witty and pleasant...something that many can relate to! Pleased to see you back in action, Jack; hope you're keeping well. ~ Regards // paul

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/13/2016 8:39:00 PM

Great sense of humor Jack. Thank you for reading and commenting. I am trying to get back in the groove again and have been entering a few of the contests. Love, Joyce.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/13/2016 8:07:00 PM

LOVE it. You are back on board. Sure wish you would stay a while and play. I just adore your wit, Jack

Jan Allison

Date: 3/13/2016 5:19:00 PM

Lovely contrast here Jack - I love those days when you can turn over and go back to sleep Jack:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx