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Bad Dream At Night

to write a wrong won't make you strong letters can hurt feeling like dirt face to face no disgrace for the flame is dead my heart became lead I had three swings of the bat can't see nothing wrong with that you will say I'm this or that may even say that I'm fat after you there is no other for you was never a bother departing will bring sorrow won't see sunshine tomorrow for three marriages I had last one made me really glad this departure just a dream oh my lord I can just scream

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Date: 7/26/2015 2:55:00 AM
the first two stanzas are golden:), enjoyed your couplets ~S.K.A.T.
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Robert Heemstra
Date: 7/26/2015 10:28:00 AM
Thank you S.K.A.T. I often heard you can't right a wrong, but how about writing a wrong? Than I was thinking of those "Dear John letters."
Date: 7/25/2015 8:33:00 PM
I can relate. Currently at my third time at bat but this time a home run is a solid gold certainty. Enjoyed reading these couplets..
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Robert Heemstra
Date: 7/26/2015 10:32:00 AM
Thank you Robert, wishing you two the very best!

Book: Shattered Sighs