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''Bad Behavior''

When you walk out the door. I wonder if you love me anymore? My mind says stay. Checked your pockets,a hotel receipt falls. Fist to the walls. My mind says stay. Question you for all you've done. Answer me now for there is none. My mind says stay. Truth be told,your heart remains cold. The lies you have sold. My mind says stay. Stupid girl,who made you her world. Fixed with diamonds and pearls. My mind says stay. Get a grip,reality check. Wish we had never met. But,my mind says stay. Play Me A Cheatin' Song Poetry Contest... Theme...Cheating...

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Date: 5/22/2011 10:50:00 AM
thankxx Kacey for your great birthday wishes luv and again good luck with this fantastic piece in Paula's contest .. hope u are having a super Sunday ..
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Date: 5/18/2011 7:26:00 AM
Thanks to all who supports my work.I really thought I saw a clear cut message in this poem...Kacey
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Date: 5/18/2011 12:24:00 AM
Good one, Kacey. I like that line "get a reality check" For SURE. Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 5/17/2011 3:31:00 PM
The questions that race through our minds when someone has been unfaithful come to life in this poem, Kacey. Many women choose to stay in such relationships. Well done! Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/17/2011 1:37:00 PM
Awesome competitor Kacey and one Paula will surely luv my friend.. good luck in the contest.. luv your refrain line .. perfect luv..
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Date: 5/17/2011 12:45:00 PM
Positive expressions on the passionate feelings of love, kacey
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Date: 5/17/2011 11:39:00 AM
I am so pleased to have had the pleasure to read your wonderful poetry this afternoon Kacey. Thank you for sharing it with us. Hoping you have a week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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