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Back At the Start

before i told him there was no going on. if he loved me he wouldnt had left his home. the rumors that i hear now that u up there. starting to think did u even care. going to school to make it from all these nothings. lease i could someday tell my kids something. we use to sit down and tell each other all we been through. how you just packed and left wasnt cool. now im sitting back at the start. charles brown is no longer in my heart.....

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Date: 8/10/2009 5:17:00 PM
thank you very much for commenting on my poem. i am glad you liked it, as i have liked yours. good write. keep up the good work
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Date: 2/19/2009 5:55:00 PM
i like your poem.. its really good. and im sorry that this happened... Welcome To Poetry Soup. Im Elizabeth. come check out my Poems if you like
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