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Bacchus Rose - Anacreontic Verse

Anacreontic verse Bacchus rose joy purging xeric throats choking upon libations conflicted aims dancing naked fearlessly awash escaping inhibition’s tyranny loosing anger’s soul through merriment releasing wingless spirits thoughtless thoughts unfettered voices mumbling wine soaked praise to numbing’s god. 10/26/2015 submitted to – Anacreontic Verse 1 – Poetry Contest sponsor – Edward Ebbs

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Date: 11/25/2015 8:51:00 AM
Anacreontic verse a new adventure for most of us but this winner will stand forever!!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 11/20/2015 9:59:00 PM
An intense write, John! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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John Lawless
Date: 11/21/2015 7:57:00 AM
Thanks Kim, appreciate your support
Date: 11/19/2015 6:22:00 PM
I am pretty much tee total John - enjoyed your write:-) hugs jan xx
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John Lawless
Date: 11/21/2015 7:57:00 AM
...there is a price to be paid for getting tucked into bed by the demon rum.....
Date: 11/19/2015 9:33:00 AM
Hi John: Beautiful poem, congratulations!
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John Lawless
Date: 11/21/2015 7:55:00 AM
Thanks Ralph
Date: 11/19/2015 9:22:00 AM
Ahh, release. A joyous night.
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John Lawless
Date: 11/21/2015 7:55:00 AM
yeah,,,,,,until the next morning.....
Date: 11/19/2015 7:12:00 AM
Bacchus at his best! Congrats!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/21/2015 9:44:00 AM
John, that would have been novel and unique!
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John Lawless
Date: 11/21/2015 7:54:00 AM
I thought of titling it "Bacchus Burped"....
Date: 11/19/2015 2:41:00 AM
enjoyed your semi abstract piece, john.. super congrats and huggs
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John Lawless
Date: 11/21/2015 7:53:00 AM
thanks Nette always good to hear from you
Date: 11/18/2015 7:35:00 PM
Congratulations John
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John Lawless
Date: 11/21/2015 7:53:00 AM
thanks Nayda
Date: 11/18/2015 6:49:00 PM
I am happy with all the enteries, congratulations on your well deserved win...thank you for participating!
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John Lawless
Date: 11/21/2015 7:53:00 AM
an interesting form and contest Edward, thanks for expanding my horizons and tormenting the muse
Date: 11/18/2015 6:37:00 PM
Congrats on your well deserved win John!! -LU *smiles*
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John Lawless
Date: 11/21/2015 7:52:00 AM
Thanks Laura
Date: 10/29/2015 3:32:00 AM
- A lovely poem, John - Luck in contest - Best wishes for a lovely day - hugs //Anne-Lise :)
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John Lawless
Date: 11/21/2015 7:51:00 AM
Thanks Anne Lise, just catching up on my reply

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