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Babbling 'bout bubbles

Coloured and in cascades, there's foam on the falls,
Elliptical dome shaped..almost perfect circles are recalled
Haven of childhood & sanctuary gained, ephemeral beauty
its existance proclaims, against backdrops on dewdrops in
rain on the leaves, bubbles are forming in torrents and streams
in my bathtub they a'wait me..under billows of steam..!

Copyright Joe Maverick 2011

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  1. Date: 8/8/2012 2:15:00 AM
    Alliterative delight....had to revisit this bubbly fun write that displays your dreamy vocab and splashes of childhood mom used to make my sister and I take baths together when we were in preschool and we would tell obnoxious jokes and pretend we were santa claus with rascally soap beards! Yes, the Dungeon of Hell is a true story about me...forgiveness is bliss tho' and our slates were all wiped clean yrs ago...thanks for inquiring, Joe. Blessings to u. gwendolen

  1. Date: 7/13/2012 11:33:00 AM
    Good one, Joe. I always love images through the eyes of children. With kids, sky's the limit. Love, daver

  1. Date: 5/2/2012 2:14:00 PM
    Kind of a bubbly daydream, taking in the gigantic to the simply domestic. This is just my impression, Joe. Could be two kids in a bathtub having a water fight. Forgive me. I like this one mucho - makes ya think. Love, daver

  1. Date: 2/20/2012 6:26:00 AM
    This is really good, ending made me laugh. Really cute poem!

  1. Date: 2/17/2012 2:51:00 PM
    How I'd love to sink in the steam mid all those bubbles! Sounds like a vacation Joe.

  1. Date: 1/22/2012 10:28:00 AM
    Don't know anybody that don't like BUBBLES. A fine write my friend. God Bless, JB

  1. Date: 11/24/2011 9:27:00 AM
    Nothing like a hot soothing bath Joe, will skin softening bubbles, nice one :)

  1. Date: 10/28/2011 8:18:00 AM
    Thank you for your always kind comments on my writing Joe. It is a pleasure to read your poetry this fine day. Hoping you have an amazing weekend. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/23/2011 4:57:00 PM
    Now this is some kind of bath, Joe! Wow! Loving the relaxing words you chose. Billows of steam...I may just fall asleeeeeeep!! Gwendolen

  1. Date: 9/21/2011 9:10:00 PM
    Got a kick out of this one Joe. A whole lot of blather about bubbles.. kinda made me want to jump in the tub! Thanks for your comment

  1. Date: 9/19/2011 7:55:00 AM
    Joe well done this is a good take on bubbles, thanks for your comments on stage mice..David

  1. Date: 9/17/2011 5:00:00 PM
    Beautiful write, Joe..."babbling 'bout bubbles" is good for the souls of all--the kid is us and adults too. Best wishes for a great weekend..God bless.. Love, Annalise

  1. Date: 9/17/2011 3:06:00 PM
    Sweet poetry here. Bubbles are one of nature's gifts to us as you show here. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 9/17/2011 9:03:00 AM
    Great verse Joe, Makes me want to drownw in those bubbles. Floats so beautifully!

  1. Date: 9/13/2011 8:35:00 PM
    An interesting write on various places for bubbles, Joe! I like a bathtub with billows of streams. It sounds so cool! Nicely done with so many details! LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 9/13/2011 6:44:00 PM
    The bubbles can be found on fals, streams, even in bathtubs, Joe. It amazes me how they do all seem perfectly circular. Even far offshore, bubbles can be seen on the sea. This is a delightful poem, my friend. I especially like the line about "haven of childhood" as I was enthralled by bubbles when I was young. Excellent write! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 9/12/2011 2:25:00 AM
    feeling the cool, bubbly mood, joe... a refreshing write with winning wishes..;) huggg, nette

  1. Date: 9/11/2011 9:25:00 PM
    mind a drifting the sounds...imagination sure abounds...if i stop me brain to listen... good one Joe!

  1. Date: 9/11/2011 7:50:00 PM
    Great idea for the contest..Reads like a winning material..Good luck..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara

  1. Date: 9/10/2011 11:34:00 PM
    HI! Joe, how are you? it's very nice to have you as a friend always~~ I've been having a the worse case of internet service... i don't think SPRINT was such a wise anyways here i am with my good service... and enjoying your poem without being kicked out. love the bubbles in your poem. kind of creepy in my tub though. I can see how one can battle bubbles always... love the cascade that forms the image in your poem... thank you for sharing,..p.d.