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B C -Before Crying-

(20/08/2011) I will hold my breath, And sweep my sight to the sky, Before crying I’ll scream out loud in heart, Stab my nails in palm over your lie, Before crying None of them worked afterward, Cos my tears dripped then vaporized From the beginning

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/15/2012 8:13:00 AM
You have emotion to share and disappointment to banish; that smile of yours will take you everywhere! :)
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Date: 8/22/2011 11:42:00 AM
love this piece Dinda great write .... !
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Date: 8/21/2011 10:54:00 PM
Dinda, i know how the feeling of holding it in is.... truly love your write,..p.d.
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Date: 8/21/2011 5:45:00 PM
this is glorious and grand Dinda.. so emotional and we girls understand emotional..good luck in the contest with this B.C. choice.. luv.
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Date: 8/20/2011 3:18:00 PM
Talk about my dark writes lol.... deep from inside a place that is tucked away...its seems to me.. luv Michael
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