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Awakening -- Visual 7

Washed clean yesterday's sun tiptoes across morning rinsed by last night's dream of darkness breaks new ___________________________________________ Andrea's Contest: Adelaide Crapsey's Poems 1/12/15 ........ Visual # 7

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Skat A

Date: 2/1/2015 2:33:00 PM

CARRIE, CONGRATULATIONS on your win *Love Sweet* SKAT

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 1/28/2015 10:17:00 AM

One of my favorites on the winner's list...congrats on your win!! Hugs, Rhonda

Abdul Malik

Date: 1/26/2015 2:44:00 PM

There's so much going on in each line. I like this the most. Pretty nice write.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/26/2015 12:36:00 PM

!!! : > )...Way to go..Sara

Bl Devnath

Date: 1/26/2015 7:52:00 AM

Wonderful poem read from you and wishing you congratulation on your superb win. Loved always,my lovely friend,bl

Arlene Smith

Date: 1/25/2015 7:18:00 PM

Congrats on a great win with this stunning piece, dear Carrie!! Hugs.. Arlene

Greg Hoffman

Date: 1/25/2015 6:40:00 PM

Carrie,congrats on your win in the contest.

David Mohn

Date: 1/25/2015 4:07:00 PM

What a stunner!...big congrats

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/25/2015 3:32:00 PM

Wow, yours is so beautiful. I almost put it at first place!! Probably should have. haha. For a tie or something. anyway, you did an awesome job. Congratulations.