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Below is the poem entitled AWAKENING which was written by poet Hazel Connelly. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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A slumberous, sense of seclusion
As sleep, is drifting from my eyes,
I look upon the translucent shade
of the morning dew
While I moving slowly do arise.

Watching therain dripping from the eaves
Silhouetted in gold from the rising sun,
My mind gradually awakening
Now a new day has begun.

Through dimly, dancing, dawns first light
With sound of the rains chime
The horizon still not clear
Just sweet thoughts of a shadowy time.

A light gust of wind, gently lifts
The dead  and dying leaves
Settling softly upon the ground
As light as the morninmg breeze.

The suns ray a smile of gold
Onthe landscapes new days light,
Now stand and look at the rainbow
A wonderful scene for mortal sight.

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  1. Date: 10/14/2012 10:21:00 AM
    I love the picture you have painted here.

    Connelly Avatar Hazel Connelly
    Date: 10/14/2012 12:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Jon.