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Awakened By a Whisper

Peacefully I sleep Dreaming… Relaxing… Experiencing… I’m floating gently on a stream Feeling the sun upon my face Tasting the cool beads of clear water on my lips Hearing the song of an eagle soaring above Seeing the evergreens towering over me Smelling patchouli from within the thicket Changing… Worrying… Panicking… The flow now rushing Feeling the chill of death upon my skin Tasting the bitterness of sadness within me Hearing my own cries Seeing my life flash before me Smelling the fear of all that surrounds me A sound… A voice… A whisper… Awakened by the sweet words of my husband It’s okay… I am here… I love you… Living in warmth, comfort, and happiness Copyright © 2009 Lena “Lolita” Townsend

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Date: 12/9/2009 10:01:00 AM
well put together; comforting and inspiring. Lovely and safe and warm. Susan
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Date: 12/6/2009 2:23:00 PM
Beautifully done Lena!!
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Date: 11/30/2009 5:23:00 PM
nicely penned, hope you are well,
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Date: 11/30/2009 12:23:00 PM
Aww! How nice! Just lovely. Beautiful imagery that took the reader on the journey of the dream that turned nightmare, but discarded by the loving voice of your husband. Perfect ending! Thanks for sharing and thank you for your comments on my poem. Caroline.
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Date: 11/29/2009 9:39:00 AM
I like the artistic presentation in this one. Good use of imagery. Thank you for sharing your poem with us. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 11/29/2009 9:20:00 AM
Thank you for your welcome blog comments today Lena.Rgds Brian
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Date: 11/28/2009 2:35:00 PM
smoothly delievered. great write. love and peace: james
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Date: 11/27/2009 5:58:00 AM
Lolita u are truly blessed to have someone who cares so much.. luv your style in this poem and your words well written to enjoy.. and I so did... blessings .. luv ... happy Monday to u... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 11/26/2009 9:36:00 AM
Took us for a fascinating little trip there, Lena! enjoyed. -Robert
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Date: 11/26/2009 12:19:00 AM
lovely whisper indeed--Charma
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