Get Your Premium Membership

Awaiting

...it began in winter month of candle light burnig love and sage roaming quiet room where graceful song play with Sapphire laced promises held precious within Verde hills a spirit climb opulent in womb of caress as seasons nurture in growth a simple joy resonate with hymns in celebration hope builds rapsody moments pass slowly expectant gift still holds fast a precious yellow flower of summer long last _____________________________ Contest "When" April 28, 2011

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 5/2/2011 10:29:00 AM
Left a comment on your blog, Rick. Thank you for posting it. The comments on mine were making me feel sicker -- blood pressure rising on the way to an EKG is not good. Thanks again for you blog. I deleted mine. No more blogging for me. No one understands what I was trying to say except you. Love, Carolyn
Login to Reply
Date: 4/29/2011 2:58:00 PM
I love the approach you took to this contest theme Rick. Great images of the seasons through the whole poem. Good luck in the contest. Best to you, Diane
Login to Reply
Date: 4/28/2011 1:49:00 PM
The anticipation of each season -- winter to spring and spring to summer -- resonates so clearly in this poem, Rick. We all need to try and live in the moment, carpe diem, instead of thinking what we will do "when" the next season comes around. Indeed, when we are filled with expectations, the "moments pass slowly." Sending winning wishes your way for the contest! Love, Carolyn
Login to Reply
Date: 4/28/2011 11:49:00 AM
Very poeticly penned..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Reads like a romance to dream about...Thanks for the comments on my blog..Since I live in Middle Georgia, I was sure some wonder if my family was effected by the storm..We are fine but there was many lives lossed in Georgia..Sara
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things