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Avoidance In Love

As i looked deep into her clear eyes And was rewarded with an enticing smile And my heart tightened with anticipation And i felt the snare entrapping my soul In a whirlwind of emotions and feelings Anticipated drama in subsequent fights Embraces of romantic love and conquest My heart double tracking in fear of hurt My mind enticing it to try again My reason screaming run for the hills I had to try and pull away urgently While i still owned my betraying heart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 11/30/2015 2:04:00 PM
There is the first,second and third stanza and in each of those the emotions are very well expressed. very well penned
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Lewis Nyaga
Date: 12/2/2015 1:01:00 AM
Thanks Njeri, for taking time to read and compliment// hugs & good tidings for christmas

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