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Autumn's Gift

Crimson leaves drift to the ground On autumn’s breeze Floating aimlessly as my thoughts. . . Destined to be surrounded Layer upon layer; Each leaf having unique Yet similar substance. In their fall to await Death, Their beauty has never been Quite as lovely Nor their colors nearly as vivid; Returning to eventual mulch, Nourishment for a new beginning, Only hinting they are renewing life With a whisper of the wind. For Amelia Harmon's "Fall Contest"

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Date: 6/13/2017 7:59:00 AM
Their demise is yet a "new beginning"...Beautiful write Connie
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Date: 6/18/2014 7:40:00 PM
Connie, my friend, this is indeed an awesome write. Thank you for directing me to more of your incredible poetry!
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Date: 2/16/2012 9:32:00 AM
Beautiful, I'm an Autumn Baby so I loved this!
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Date: 12/26/2011 9:34:00 AM
A lovely way to describe the circle of life Connie! Your descriptions paint my mind with all the vivid images of my favorite season.
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Date: 9/22/2010 3:42:00 AM
wow this is just beautiful!! such appreciation in such a simple act of nature! Your descriptions are absorbing! and again thank you for the comment on Desire's Fire...i feel very privilaged for such amaizing words..much love
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Date: 9/13/2010 1:09:00 PM
Thnx for the cool comment on my writes, Connie. Your a kind friend. ...Jimmy
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Date: 9/6/2010 2:37:00 PM
beautiful free verse , Connie and congratulations on your fine win!
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Date: 9/3/2010 10:49:00 AM
Lovely words and so vivid a picture
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Date: 9/3/2010 8:14:00 AM
Somehow I missed this beauty earlier...but a lovely poem, so glad to read it now! ~ Carrie
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Date: 9/2/2010 9:46:00 PM
Beautiful entry. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/1/2010 11:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this fine write, Connie!:) Emily
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Date: 9/1/2010 10:52:00 AM
Congratulations Connie on your win in Amelia Harmon's contest "Fall". Love, Carol
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Date: 9/1/2010 5:54:00 AM
Very nice write, you know Ilove the cycle of life theme ;) Light & Love Debbie Do
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Date: 9/1/2010 4:42:00 AM
A rare splash of beauty you have sketched in this lovely painting of Autumn. It's Gem of a Poem my friend. What a beauty in these lovely lines, 'Crimson leaves drift to the ground On autumn’s breeze Floating aimlessly as my thoughts.' Great write and a very well deserving win. Congrats for your win and many thanks for your precious comments on Patradoot and for your good wishes. Love and best wishes always....Ravindra....Connie Marcum Wong
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Date: 9/1/2010 4:31:00 AM
Congratulations Connie with your win in Amelia's contest.. enjoy your day, love Wilma
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Date: 9/1/2010 2:19:00 AM
this is a wonderland concept of how you see Autumn Connie. love this poem. Harry
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Date: 9/1/2010 1:12:00 AM
oh that last line of yours just captured me-- very eloquently written Connie! Congrats with this one--wonderful way of rendering nature's cycle with this beautiful poem-- hugs, nikko :)
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Date: 8/31/2010 10:41:00 PM
congratulations, Connie, this is marvelous writing, very mature, and she loved YOURS!! I'm glad you took this challenge. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/31/2010 10:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the Fall Contest! Love, Audrey
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Date: 8/31/2010 7:25:00 PM
As beautiful poem as an Autumn Gift, dear Connie. Congratulations on your win and thank you for your nice comments. Love, iolanda
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Date: 8/31/2010 6:05:00 PM
congrats on your HM with this wonderful entry
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Date: 8/31/2010 5:45:00 PM
So glad to see this one in the winners' circle, Connie. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/31/2010 3:33:00 PM
So beautiful..I love it. congrats on your success in the contest. BG
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Date: 8/31/2010 2:59:00 PM
This speaks gently....just as the last line of your lovely poem. Congratulations, Connie on your winning poem! ~ Carrie
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Date: 8/31/2010 2:26:00 PM
Congrats Connie on your super win in the Fall contest... enjoy your happy moment my friend with luv.. glad u enjoyed the wedding photos..luv..
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