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Autumn Treetops

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Autumn Treetops

Natural attire, 
Iridescent canopies;
A leaden wardrobe.

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  1. Date: 5/9/2009 9:57:00 AM
    Good, good, good, Nice write. I love autumn myself

  1. Date: 5/5/2009 12:53:00 PM
    Loved the last line, a wardrobe of leaves.

  1. Date: 5/4/2009 1:22:00 AM
    Raul, What a beautiful Haiku -presents a vivid picture of treetops with fresh shoots in autumn. I am sure you meant to write 'laden' in the third line. Thanks for congratulating me on my poem Defaulter making the semi finals. I am grateful. -Mohammad

  1. Date: 5/3/2009 11:47:00 PM

  1. Date: 5/3/2009 8:34:00 PM
    I can see this so clearly, it all it's beauty, you do beautify the written word so well Raul.

  1. Date: 5/3/2009 7:25:00 PM
    She dresses for you as well as you dress her ... keep on writing, friend.

  1. Date: 5/3/2009 6:13:00 PM
    Mail for my friend...

  1. Date: 5/3/2009 6:08:00 PM

  1. Date: 5/3/2009 12:37:00 PM
    So much is seen in these words - great imagery - thank you for your comments on my poem..