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Autumn Stroll

strolling old cracked sidewalks brownstone, pumpkin lined streets wood burning smoke rises over fall skies Written on 10/21/2015

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Skat A

Date: 10/29/2015 9:08:00 PM

Laura, Congratulations on your "Autumn Stroll win." Love SKAT

Kim Merryman

Date: 10/28/2015 9:55:00 PM

A lovely "city" view of autumn, Laura. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Laura Leiser
Date: 10/29/2015 1:54:00 PM

Yes, I wanted a different spin on this, and I'm glad you liked it, Kim :)

Janice Canerdy

Date: 10/28/2015 9:27:00 AM

This is lovely, Laura! Congratulations on your win. Janice

Laura Leiser
Date: 10/29/2015 1:53:00 PM

Thank you, Janice, and thank you :)

James Inman

Date: 10/27/2015 8:32:00 AM

Nice take on the theme. So many very lovely poems but so similar as well. Nice to read something a little different.

Laura Leiser
Date: 10/29/2015 1:53:00 PM

I wanted to be a little different and thanks, James :)

Laura Hay

Date: 10/24/2015 4:30:00 AM

Great poem, love the 3rd line in particular, great imagery from this one, good luck to you too Laura! ;) warm regards LH

Laura Leiser
Date: 10/29/2015 1:52:00 PM

Thank you, Laura!

Jerry T Curtis

Date: 10/23/2015 4:28:00 PM

I always smells like hickory to me, good one Laura

Laura Leiser
Date: 10/23/2015 4:35:00 PM

I'm glad you liked this, Jerry! Thank you :)

Eric Boddie

Date: 10/23/2015 1:20:00 PM

as people, we all Love fall....and not the one that leaves us less than tall....but the time of year where change manifests.....and the weather cools, autumn is the best....;)

Laura Leiser
Date: 10/23/2015 4:17:00 PM

Responding on a poem WITH a poem! So cool :) Thank you, Eric!

Jan Allison

Date: 10/22/2015 6:42:00 AM

lovely imagery Laura good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Laura Leiser
Date: 10/22/2015 10:02:00 AM

Thank you, Jan. I appreciate your comment :)