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Autumn Shower

AUGUST SHOWER By: Andrew Stevans (all rights) The sky was deep, dark and clear. Stars sparkled like moonlit rain frozen; When, far in the north sky—it seemed so near-- A bright meteor speared the horizon. My ears seemed ready for a resonance, Like thunder rolls after a lightning strike. I sat immobile, not daring to chance Missing a second streak across the night. Marveling at the speed of its decent, I wondered, was it really there at all? Was this an isolated incident, Or were others also about to fall? Standing slowly, I gained a wider view. The stars seemed to breath in their velvet night; When, suddenly, the event began anew, As many meteors took their southern flight. The silent drama diminished me. I, a mortal, with mortal fantasy, Mere dust on an orb of sky and sea; This orb mere dust of a galaxy.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/30/2015 9:32:00 PM
Andy, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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Andy Stevans
Date: 5/2/2015 11:57:00 AM
Thanks for the friendly and encouraging comments. The poem appeared in a book of poems "An Indian from Manassas," written in 1988. Your diversity (different types/classifications of poetry) is impressive, as well as your gift. As an aside, I'm searching for a good--easy to read, preferably with many pictures :)--poetry book that explains the different types of poetry... Andy
Date: 4/30/2015 9:07:00 PM
Fabulous imagery, Andrew, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 5/2/2015 12:13:00 PM
Thanks for the "Fabulous Imagery" comment. I'm not in your "Poet" category by any means. I write primarily memoire and oral history, though I do have a number of poems (late 1980s) written in a small book titled "An Indian from Manassas" that "Autumn Shower" was a part of. I see you have many different styles (types/classifications) of poems. Your work is impressive. Do you know of a book that is easy to read and comprehend, that explains the different types of poetry? Andy

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