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Autumn Leaf In Paradise

I can see it in your eyes: Autumn Leaf in Paradise, and I fear for all the trees full of stupid theories about never-ending summer while The Big Hand holds a hammer above all fragility and I wonder if you see Autumn Leaf in Paradise softly glowing in my eyes like an answer and a seal in the last tree on the hill. www.simonadancila.com

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Date: 9/26/2014 11:00:00 AM
Beautiful write - love it! Pandita
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Date: 9/26/2014 7:29:00 AM
Fine title using the figure of speech hyperbole with nice flow of thoughts, Dancilla
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