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Autumn Haiku

how fragile is love as the bloom of romance chills… the fall in your eyes 21 Oct 2015

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Date: 11/9/2015 1:31:00 PM
very beautiful David many congrats on your win in the trashed #3 contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/9/2015 11:08:00 AM
David, Congratulations on your Trashed #3 win. SKAT
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Date: 10/28/2015 7:02:00 PM
'a shame if this is the one you were telling me about that did not place. It is wonderful, David. I love the symbolism
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David Mohn
Date: 10/28/2015 7:37:00 PM
thanks so much for the nice comment Andrea, I do value your opinion :)
Date: 10/23/2015 12:16:00 PM
A single haiku that is worth a lot! Excellent, David; great end line. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 10/23/2015 12:00:00 PM
Great work..Way to go..Reads like a winner to me..Sara
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