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Autumn Days

Rowan berries cluster orange ripening an August morning. Tart apples crisp knotted branches, fallen, scarred fruit soften wasp warm soil. Blackcurrants burst sweet bowing from boisterous bushes. Spent raspberry canes rust birthing fleshy new shoots, prickly with prospect. The rambling red rose laughs leaping the garden wall, thorny veins throb puce under an energetic sun. A cloudy sea races beneath the stirring breeze as trembling trees shudder the call to Autumn. Dark shadows bounce peppering my lawn I stretch, brushing off the creeping dread of dark days to come MMC © 2011

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Date: 9/18/2011 9:38:00 PM
Zowie, this is splendid writing. What imagery: a rose leaping the garden wall Love it!! Is this in a contest? I should hope so!!
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Date: 9/18/2011 7:22:00 AM
Sweetly penned on autumn season,Eiken.I enjoyed it.Thank you for congrats.
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Date: 9/18/2011 1:27:00 PM
Fabiyas, well done, your work is so good.

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