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Autumn Breeze

The shades of autumn, beautiful to see, And I hear your whisper from fallen leaves, I wish you could come, to be here with me, So lonely and cold is the autumn breeze. I miss your smile your joyful summer songs, And I look for you in old memories, I wish you were here, to enjoy the fall, So lonely and cold is the autumn breeze. Red and gold leaves, circle above the ground, While sobbing and silent stand the bare trees, I wish you could come, and sit beside me, So lonely and cold is the autumn breeze. Second Place Only II - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Laura Loo Each line has 10- syllables. May 2, 2016. Sponsored by: Teppo Gren Second Place, Contest judged on May 22, 2016. Gren's Evergreens (Golden Oldies) # 2 - Poetry Contest Inspired by the song - Autumn Leaves by Natalie Cole

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Date: 7/11/2016 8:36:00 AM
Congrats Meenakshi, for your top placement with this beautiful piece!! ;-)
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Date: 7/10/2016 12:03:00 PM
MeeNakshi ...nice win. Skat
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Date: 7/9/2016 4:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your podium win in Laura's Premiere contest, Meenakshi, for your lovely poem. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 7/9/2016 2:51:00 PM
Meenakshi, superb rhyme, congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of m contest :)-luloo
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Date: 5/25/2016 7:44:00 AM
Congrats on your Golden Oldies playing on the winners’ page..Way to go!!! Aren’t those oldies impressive..Sara
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Date: 5/3/2016 12:49:00 PM
Beautiful poem my lovely friend. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl
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Meenakshi Raina
Date: 5/3/2016 1:17:00 PM
Thanks BL.

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