Autumn Breeze

Autumn Breeze flowing on an autumn day, how cold thou art How icy art thou fingers, when thou dost clench my heart My ribs, my soul, why even my mind Walking alone down the road, Hoping to leave my ghosts behind I suddenly realize that thou ethos dost match with my mood Autumn, I believe only a hot coffee would lighten me up for good!

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/28/2014 11:35:00 PM

It went from classic feel to very modern once you got to that last line. I enjoyed reading this one on the winners' list!!

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 12/28/2014 11:50:00 AM

You painted good Image here ,congrats on the win my friend...huggs

Jan Allison

Date: 12/28/2014 11:10:00 AM

love the imagery in your poem - mine is a cup of tea not coffee after an autumnal walk:-) many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/28/2014 10:18:00 AM

A G., Congratulations, on your win. Many enjoyable Autumn poem. Stop by my latest blog "Autumn's Gown" if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 9/13/2014 10:49:00 AM

I have seen poets love hot coffee during onset of Autumn. Happy to know her ethos has going even with you. So good luck. Enjoy fun. Your poem is sweet. I liked the lines :"Walking alone down the road, Hoping to leave my ghosts behind". Grand image. Love Anoucheka.