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Autumn Breeze

Autumn brings cold darkness Enveloping fog gathers Hanging in joyless khaki Leaves mound noiselessly Offering people quiet rustles Should the unsuspecting vegetation Whirl xcitable-as-a young zephyr Please excuse the minor indescretion on the last line :)

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Date: 11/27/2013 1:41:00 AM
Nick, Thank you for spreading and sharing your kindness. I am very grateful and thankful to all who have been supportive of me one way or another. Your heartfelt words are the main attraction of who you are… Thanks for your inspiring visit. ----- Happy Thanksgiving ~ LINDA
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Date: 3/1/2012 7:03:00 AM
I like to read a good poem Nick, lovely. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 2/29/2012 10:26:00 AM
so creative with a charming feel to it, nick... grreaat job!..:) huggs!
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Date: 2/28/2012 1:01:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poetry.
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Date: 2/28/2012 9:18:00 AM
luv it Nick.. visuall.. i,aginative.. detailed i,agery.. fascinating.. and last line is umique .. good write ..luv..
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