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Autumn At An Automat

Autumn at an Automat Austere aloofness. Assessment approbation. Allays apathy. Inspired by Brian Strand’s Imagine Contest http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Automat_(painting) Poetic Form: Ekphrasis (Art Inspired) Haiku with Alliteration.

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James Fraser

Date: 10/17/2009 6:11:00 PM

Excellent piece Dane Ann, all the best in Brian's contest >> James

Elaine George

Date: 10/11/2009 1:10:00 PM

Dear Dane, Wonderful combination of Haiku and Alliteration captauring th essence of the painting. Best wishes in Brian's contest. Love, Lainie

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/10/2009 3:38:00 AM

It is amazing the difference that can come across from the same painting. I like the Haiku and alliteration combination. Keep writing. Sara

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/10/2009 3:36:00 AM

gonna read my soup mail now and work on it-thANKS:)

Brian Strand

Date: 10/10/2009 12:31:00 AM

Nice one Dane.Thank you for your welcome comments Rgds Brian

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/9/2009 5:35:00 PM

Another ~~~Excellent Haiku Dane Ann~~~. Love, Carol

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/9/2009 2:13:00 PM

talented superb-Charma

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/9/2009 12:31:00 PM

very nice! Light & Love

Jared Pickett

Date: 10/9/2009 11:28:00 AM

I like your style.... I must try that brand of Haiku....Stay tuned........:JP]

Sean Kelly

Date: 10/9/2009 8:18:00 AM

Is there no end to your talent , DA . A complete new form of Haiku !! Wow !! ..

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/9/2009 8:09:00 AM

A wonderful depiction of this somber painting. ~ Good luck, Dane Anne! ~ Carrie