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Autumn and Its Falling Leaves Part I

I like the season of autumn And love to watch the falling of leaves Listening the music of Nature While walking and moving amid the bunch of trees When the breeze blows creating music While moving from trees to trees In Autumn, when trees are shedding leaves I love to watch the falling of leaves It’s splendid beyond words to write When leaves are falling from trees in autumn A beauty to see and a joy to feel in our heart When thousands of leaves fly in the air and depart Before they embrace their friends on ground In Autumn, when trees are shedding leaves I love to watch the falling of leaves In the much awaited season of autumn When breeze touch us and embraces the trees And the setting sun spreads its beaming rays On flowers, trees and on leaves departing from trees It appears as if the sky is showering Its precious treasures on Nature and mankind In Autumn, when trees are shedding leaves I love to watch the falling of leaves Some of them fall on me as if to greet While some to tell their story in brief They seems to murmur while in the air And while falling on the heap of leaves Those which were singing, dancing and enjoying While flying in the air, resting on ground or lying Had a cool smile and were singing their love song last They lived a life full of hopes and loved everyone till last In Autumn, when trees are shedding leaves I love to watch the falling of leaves They kept their promises made to God Of loving their fellow folks till their last They were singing, dancing on nature’s thrill While on trees, they happily inhaled shining rays And enjoyed Moon’s nectar till it became pale This was the story they were trying to convey To each passerby who had time to stay To listen the story of leaves without a say In Autumn, when trees are shedding leaves I love to watch the falling of leaves. Kanpur 20th Nov. 2009 concluded in Part II

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Date: 2/13/2011 3:08:00 PM
wonderful Autumn piece! Thanks for sharing this with us. Congrats on having your poem bieng featured this week. Keep writing dear friend! Wishing you many more feature. Love always, Adeleke
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Date: 2/9/2011 9:03:00 AM
Congrats on your feature this week Ravindra. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/8/2011 9:30:00 AM
Congrats Ravindra on being featured this week on Poetry Soup. Vince
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Date: 2/6/2011 6:01:00 PM
Congrats Ravindra my friend on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great one to share with us all with luv.. enjoyed my friend..
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Date: 12/10/2009 4:43:00 AM
Autumn is my favorite season, and you've captured its essence beautifully in this poem! Now I'm going to go read part 2 :-) ~Juliane
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Date: 12/5/2009 5:21:00 AM
Excellent! you capture great beauty in your poems,love Simone
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Date: 11/23/2009 4:19:00 PM
By the looks of the brilliant poems I am reading it looks like you all have new ink pens. I wish you all a wonderful week filled with love and inspiration. Happy Thanksgiving to all that celebrate. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/23/2009 8:43:00 AM
Beautiful style, Ravindra, on this one and the descriptive quality is excellent.. looking forward to reading part 2 if u are inclined to write a sequence... one thing... this I would consider a rhyme poem so when u post your poem try to list what type of poem it is .. better for the reader to glance up and see your choice type of poetry.. if u don't know what it is look at the forms of poetry list on the left side of homepage.. very helpful.. thankxxx for your comments on my poetry today..
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Date: 11/22/2009 11:02:00 AM
sounds beautiful, keep sharing!
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