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Autumn Air

You see your breath In the Autumn air. frozen, your sitting in dispair. Deep, Deep, Sinking into the dark. You close your eyes. Your at peace now. You open your eyes to a changed world around you. Mckenzie Argall Autumn Air 10/26/12

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Date: 3/14/2016 12:24:00 AM
nice to see this one again, Mckenzie Argall..LINDA
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Date: 11/11/2012 6:17:00 PM
Mckenzie, Congratulations with your awesome poem on the featured spots of the week.. Take care.. ~xox~pd
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Date: 11/6/2012 3:03:00 PM
Interesting work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..I like the contrast in the few lines..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 11/6/2012 6:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your awesome poetry being featured this week Mckenzie. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/5/2012 7:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Russell's "Up In The Autumn Air" contest Mckenzie. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/4/2012 3:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Mckenzie xx
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Mckenzie Argall
Date: 11/4/2012 12:28:00 PM
Thanks!
Date: 11/3/2012 9:54:00 PM
Unique one in the contest! ME LIKES> and congrats on your win.
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Mckenzie Argall
Date: 11/4/2012 12:28:00 PM
haha! Thanks!
Date: 11/3/2012 7:46:00 PM
Congratulaitons Mckenzie. Love, Joyce
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Mckenzie Argall
Date: 11/4/2012 12:29:00 PM
Thanks!
Date: 11/1/2012 4:51:00 PM
nice description of showing the change in seasons.
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