Autumn

Leaves once gleaming green Lay brown and rotting in dust Circle of life whirls Written on:09/19/206 Contest: Autumn Haiku

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Kim Merryman

Date: 9/22/2016 4:48:00 PM

Good one, Sara! Congrats on your win! Blessings!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/20/2016 8:38:00 PM

Nicely done Sara, congrats on your win.

Sara Chansarkar
Date: 9/21/2016 3:56:00 PM

Thanks Richard!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/20/2016 6:44:00 PM

Awesome last line, SAra. Congrats for the win.

Sara Chansarkar
Date: 9/21/2016 3:56:00 PM

Thanks a lot Andrea,appreciate your visit!

Jan Allison

Date: 9/20/2016 4:36:00 PM

The circle of life is complete - love this one Sara many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Sara Chansarkar
Date: 9/21/2016 3:55:00 PM

Thanks Jan,I loved yours too!

Lu Loo

Date: 9/20/2016 4:19:00 PM

Sweet Sara, very true about the circle of life..as soon as summer ends, comes all the beautiful hues but after that not so pretty colors arrive...congratulations on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest lovely friend :)-luloo

Sara Chansarkar
Date: 9/21/2016 3:55:00 PM

Thanks Laura,appreciate the placement!