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Auf Wiedersehen

A shaft of sunlight cleaves their reveries and the spell evaporates, their fate is sealed, their goose is cooked! Morning-mouthed, bedraggled, the reality of day makes for a rude awakening as reluctantly they say 'auf wiedersehen.'

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/1/2016 11:56:00 PM
'Morning mouthed'- what a great way to describe that lip smacking, bottom of a bird cage tongued feeling. Great write, Keith, enjoyed. Regards, Viv
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Date: 2/2/2016 12:19:00 AM
Thanks Viv! much obliged... Keith
Date: 2/1/2016 9:32:00 PM
That sad word "good bye". Nice job here! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 2/1/2016 4:56:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this one today..Great topic..Sara
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