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attempting to make model aeroplanes - - super glued fingers modern haiku

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/14/2011 6:21:00 AM

Thank you so much for your kind comments on my writing Jack. I wish you continued inspiration that you may always write and share your poetry with us. Love, Carol

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/10/2011 6:01:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. x

Gwendolen Song

Date: 12/9/2011 5:27:00 AM

My new comment trend on the Soup is to consistently agree with Andrea!..... Again, I AGREE...This one was to my heart's delight.... My darling spouse really enjoys building WW2 airplane models...and u are dead right...what a mess!! Wish this were top top of the winners. Loved it. Blessings. Gwendolen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/8/2011 11:39:00 PM

dang, this one I had hoped to see in top ten. It was awesome, Jack. Congrats on being in the winners' circle. Luv, Andrea

Kash Poet

Date: 12/8/2011 11:25:00 PM

love it Jack!Congrats on your win in the contest of Cyndi.

Kim Merryman

Date: 12/8/2011 4:37:00 PM

I can certainly picture this = super glue is so tricky! Congrats on your HM, Jack. Kim

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/8/2011 4:07:00 PM

ahhhh yes!!! and yes you have written a haiku [shame on you! :P] Congrad's Light & Love Always

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 12/8/2011 1:26:00 PM

Hahaha! Oh gosh why did I suddenly burst out laughing here? Hehe, I could just imagine this happening! I have had my bouts with super glue. haha, always a fun experience... ;) Congrats on all your wins, Jack!

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer

Date: 12/8/2011 12:59:00 PM

LOL Jack! That is why I will never try. I'm sure it would end in a trip to the ER :) Congrats. on you HM.

David Williams

Date: 12/8/2011 12:30:00 PM

Jack congrats on your win..David

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/8/2011 11:11:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in Cyndi's "Creativity" contest Jack. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/6/2011 10:10:00 PM

THIS is really good, Jack. I hope it scores high. Call you sticky fingers!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 12/6/2011 9:11:00 PM

What a sticky mess you have constructed, Jack!! lol. I am completely entertained by your clever wit, friend. Just awesome. Good luck....find a new hobby. lol. Gwendolen

Russell Sivey

Date: 12/6/2011 1:08:00 PM

I can't do those models, I honestly do get that glue all over me and my fingers! I don't have the patience to do those...I'm always in awe when I see a model finished, I'm quite impressed by this! It sounds like you might have done several before!! Great Work!!

Tony Lane

Date: 12/6/2011 12:56:00 PM

I've done that more than once. Tony

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 12/6/2011 11:48:00 AM

* "HAHAHAHA * I DO THAT SOMETIMES WITH MY VERY WORDS * MY DEAR SWEET PRECIOUS JACK * MY TONGUE GETS STUCK TO THE TOP MY LIPS *.* VERY SWEET * HAPPY HOLIDAYS TO YOU * MY LUV ALWAYS * SARAH." *

Daver Austin

Date: 12/6/2011 11:28:00 AM

YES! I had a second childhood, sent to Cleveland for plans and built half a dozen huge biplanes from WW I. They hang from my bedroom ceiling and gather dust. I gave up on super glue for the very reason you've written about. Boy did all that dope mess up my lungs! Poetry is much more healthy. Great write, Jack. Love, daver