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\ A Small Crowd gathered to watch the procession Simple Shame brought them to the small parade Cemetery Gates Grated in the Gusty winds A Deafening Silence his only funeral dirge He wasn't well known.. he Lived Lonely, Lived Lost Isolation seemed is Only Choice, wounded by fate. A Fearful Face, marred by the ravishes of war Causing Families and Friends to turn away Bereft- Alone Together with his daemons Now, at last, a Silent Song of Peace For the Free For All contest

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Date: 9/10/2010 10:18:00 PM
Yes a sad tale this was and a very interesting poem Barbara. Congrats on your fine win. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 9/2/2010 6:45:00 AM
a sad tale! congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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Date: 9/2/2010 5:39:00 AM
Dear Barbara, Congratulations on YOUR Well Deserved Win Very Emotional Superbly Done LOVE YOU ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 8/30/2010 4:58:00 AM
Congratulations Barbara on your win in Charles Henderson's contest "Free For All Do As You Please". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/27/2010 7:26:00 PM
Congrats on the win, Barbara
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Date: 8/27/2010 2:12:00 PM
Don't know how I missed this moving poem earlier, LNC, but let me add my congratulations. So many funerals bring few mourners. Sad to think about it, but I like to think every life has some meaning. You worked very well with the alliteration and oxymorons. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/27/2010 1:38:00 PM
LOve reading the oxymorons in these kinds of poems. Congats on your really fine win, BArbara. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 8/27/2010 1:20:00 PM
Congrats Barb on your big win in Charles's contest with another glorious piece of writing ..enjoy your win today.. happy weekend..with luv..
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Date: 8/27/2010 11:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your 2nd place win. An excellent write ~ Sharon :)
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Date: 8/27/2010 11:43:00 AM
Great work....and so worthy of this 2nd place, Barbara !! Congratulations on your win! (ps...hope you are feeling much better now!! ) Love, Carrie
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Date: 8/27/2010 10:58:00 AM
Congratulations Barbara, on your worthy second place presentation. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/22/2010 7:40:00 PM
Wow Ms. Barbara I have lived those images too often in my life it seems. Still we must feel the burden of our kindred lifted when they suffer no more. Well written =)
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Date: 8/22/2010 11:18:00 AM
very powerful, greatimpact. Thanks for always reading my verses & participating in the contest. Perhaps you could give input on my blog? Light & Love
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Date: 8/22/2010 10:44:00 AM
Dear Barbara, Another winner, YOUR astounding talent takes YOU to the Winners Circle Superb Laureatus POETRY YOUR Liege ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 8/22/2010 6:54:00 AM
Beautiful shapes and imagery BG.Rgds Brian
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