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At the Stroke of Midnigiht

AT THE STROKE OF MIDNIGHT Night had fallen and the twilight sky grew dark A soft wind whistled across the pine trees bark In the silence we walked along, not holding hands We felt our love was drifting with the time worn sands ~ Clouds mingled high among bright silver stars that sparkled in the distant sky We knew the time had come and lingered long afraid to be the one to say goodbye ~ Now, when I hear the church bells deep at night, I cry For the love we felt so wrong, was right When I hear the mournful stroke of midnight I know it means that he, no more will hold me tight ©N L B 3/14/09

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Date: 4/27/2009 9:25:00 PM
So sad dear one, to miss the love that you share can be a hard thing to go through, emotinal and telling.
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Date: 4/27/2009 7:54:00 PM
Beautiful writing, Neva! The last verse is so sad, but I like the way the church bells evoke so much emotion. Lovely!
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Date: 4/27/2009 4:30:00 PM
This captures such sadness, with beautiful imagery. It breaks my heart a little bit. Kat
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