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At the Edge

Who is that far off I see, at the edge of that sorrowfull plea, walking past as I try to hide, although my shadow is at my side, A voice within knaws at me, I can't escape that part of me, Who are you it would always say, and hoping I could answer one day, I ignored that voice once again, hoping to find the solutions end, yet that knawing feeling would never go, till at the edge my dreams were so....

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Date: 6/9/2013 12:12:00 AM
Hello Bryan, Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-) Take care, and enjoy your wonderful days ahead . Always & Forever! **LINDA**
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Date: 5/25/2013 11:51:00 AM
Bryan, your poem is very enjoyable :-) A nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~SKAT~
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Date: 5/20/2013 7:10:00 AM
Great write. I think the last two lines some up the theme very well.. "yet that gnawing feeling would never go, till the edge of my dreams were so..#x
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Date: 5/19/2013 7:38:00 PM
I really like this one and welcome to poetry soup - JH
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Date: 5/19/2013 6:14:00 PM
Nice write! Welcome to the soup. Kim
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Date: 5/19/2013 3:28:00 PM
Hi Bryan, Welcome to poetry soup. My name is Linda; If you like, please consider checking out my newest contest for fun : -) You can find the contest page by clicking on the top left hand side. You will find many different contests to choose from. I’m looking forward in reading and following your poems as of now and the future. If you ever want or need feedback on certain poems, please look me up. I can't wait to read what you highly recommend. You can always stop by and say hi if you like. Keep me posted when you post your next poem…. Thank you ~ Always & Forever *LINDA"
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