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At the Bus Stop

My heart was beating wildly; So much I had to say; I only managed, ‘Morning.’ Until another day… I wonder what you think of me (Assuming that you do); And do you know my heart’s on fire Each time I look at you? For Giorgio’s Small Poem contest Romantic, Jack Horne

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/16/2014 8:24:00 PM
Definitely a winner here! Congratulations Jack. This is a well deserved win! xxxAnnalise
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Date: 3/10/2014 6:18:00 AM
Very Wonderful write. Congrats on the win, jack
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Date: 3/10/2014 2:55:00 AM
jack awesome win. ~ Love ~ SKAT
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Date: 3/9/2014 4:42:00 PM
- A wonderful poem posted for Giorgio A.V. contest - "Impress me with a small poem III" - Congratulations on your win, Jack !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/7/2014 10:49:00 PM
awww, Jack, are you still pining for her? this is a cute little romantic poem. Good to see you posting a new poem. I always look forward to that. And thanks for seeing several of mine.
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Date: 3/7/2014 10:35:00 PM
This is such a glorious write, you've reached deep into your clever head and pulled out a tremendous poem here! Short and sweet, I really enjoyed reading this phenomenal piece this evening! Great Work!!
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Date: 3/7/2014 6:41:00 PM
Short but very sweet romantic write Jack!
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Date: 3/7/2014 6:21:00 PM
great "small" poem, jack! i hope she notices you...
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Date: 3/7/2014 5:48:00 PM
Very sweet....lovely, Jack. Good one!
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Date: 3/7/2014 4:55:00 PM
Nice to see sweet infatuation's not dead Jack. You speak with such eloquent simplicity. GL in the contest. Peace. :)
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Date: 3/7/2014 3:11:00 PM
This is spectacular Jack
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Date: 3/7/2014 3:05:00 PM
Ahh!! Very expressive and passionate in just a few words..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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