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At First Glance

Enter beauty, for sunlight to enhance To share this marble fountain, where I sit With length of hair, its simple elegance And flowing dress with a casual split As I see a smile and eyes slowly lift To find time has stopped while the world grew small With restless energy, hands subtle shift A smile returned with quiet answered call To glean this moment without care or thought And hold it close as a gift now treasured In this place of rest neither bought or sought Distance between our eyes can't be measured Perhaps enchantment or perhaps romance Woven in time from a fleeting first glance contest At First Glance 6/30/14

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Date: 7/13/2014 5:15:00 AM
Beauty of words is a joy forever,, woven in time from fleeting first glance ,, not perhaps but for sure it's love Frederic! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 7/2/2014 7:33:00 PM
This is a beautiful poem and I wish you luck in the contest.... Lucilla
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Frederic Parker
Date: 7/2/2014 7:45:00 PM
thank you for your kindness Lucilla
Date: 7/1/2014 7:18:00 PM
wow you took the theme and beautified it!!! Such a graceful and charming write, Frederick. Best wishes in the contest.
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Frederic Parker
Date: 7/2/2014 7:45:00 PM
and to think it took a marble fountain to have a moment to remember

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