At a Loose End

Adrift in a mist of Advent's glare- dying dregs of Autumn's fare

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Sean Kelly

Date: 12/6/2008 8:18:00 AM

Excellent Cinqku , Brian that captures this time of year .....

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/6/2008 6:44:00 AM

As much as I rather miss Autumn, the coming Advent is a time of reflection. Perfect poem for an ending and a beginning. Nice one! ~ Carrie

Sharon Winter

Date: 12/6/2008 5:45:00 AM

Yes, a splendid poem and I agree with both comments. A rhyming Cinqku - wonderful! Love, Shar

Michael Jordan

Date: 12/6/2008 4:28:00 AM

Brian this is another example of the master at work - Excellently written - God Bless, MJ

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 12/6/2008 4:03:00 AM

I loved all the D's and A's here, Advent truly does shine, and thank goodness for that. :) I know Autumn does not mind passing the torch. :) love, Kristin