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Asylum walls

All these noises
All these voices
How close are we all
To asylum walls

I curse and I cry
I crave and I call
Out to the shallow
To the demons and dreams in my shadow

Make it go away
Make it stay
This is living hell
This is me in a cell

Empty words
Hollow promises
Shallow souls
Searching for the same thing

Where does it end
When we're already bent
Broken and numb
You took my sun

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  1. Date: 10/27/2013 10:45:00 AM
    Hi. I like you poem it’s a nice piece. Where about in South African are you, do you have any poetry organization your know.

  1. Date: 10/6/2013 10:16:00 AM
    Very well written, fantastica! Welcum to poetry soup,here is a safe haven you pour your emotions and feelings. Meeting new friends that will make a difference in your life. Kudos. Baron Of Ebullion.

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 9:03:00 PM
    Hi Tharisa, ,A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@\

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 6:59:00 PM
    Hi Tharisa, , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 2:59:00 PM
    Welcome to P-Soup, Tharisa ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)