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Asylum

In everyday plight With no sight of the light With no sides that are bright Deprived of lies that are white There would be only one asylum: Veritas ad dominandum

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Date: 7/29/2012 10:00:00 PM
Lukasz, still congratulating all my sisters past contest. . Now I'm on the poets favorite poem contest.. I'm actually amazed with all these poems. I see why they are chosen as a favorite poem by other poets...a Super Congratulations here. I think I agreed with all the winners in this contest... love~PD
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Date: 7/26/2012 12:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in SKAT's "Members Favorite Poem" contest Lukasz. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/26/2012 4:54:00 AM
Lukasz a belated congrats on your win..David
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Date: 7/25/2012 1:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 7/25/2012 9:37:00 AM
Congrats on your win Lukasz
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Date: 7/25/2012 8:57:00 AM
Congrats, Lukasz. Outstanding. Well deserved win. Kudos. Ralph
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Date: 7/25/2012 1:56:00 AM
Nice poem... congratulations on your win... Terry
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Date: 7/20/2012 10:46:00 AM
[okies I give up what does the latin mean?] Congrad's on your fine write making it through to round one in an international poetry contest. Light & Love
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Lukasz Walterowicz
Date: 7/20/2012 3:32:00 PM
"Truth will reign" :]
Date: 7/18/2012 9:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through round one of the PoetrySoup International Poetry Contest. I wish you the best in the finals Lukasz. Love, Carol
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Lukasz Walterowicz
Date: 7/19/2012 1:49:00 PM
Thank you Carol, it is an honour. ;]
Date: 7/6/2012 6:01:00 PM
CONGRATS on your win and PLACEMENT! Cx keep it up!
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Date: 7/6/2012 5:59:00 PM
Oh, sounds like my situation in the mental hospital....I like this poem...brings back bittersweet memories though. But, great job! :)
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Date: 4/16/2012 5:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in P.D's "Under Ten Minutes" contest Lukasz. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/13/2012 9:59:00 PM
Lukasz, , a wonderful congratulations.. with your awesome poem in my contest. :-) always~ PD
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Date: 12/12/2011 8:29:00 AM
Aren't the best writes the ones that come to us in the spark of a moment...you say to yourself..oh, where's my pen? What am I gonna write this on?..... Enjoyed. Gwendolen
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Date: 12/9/2011 2:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Lukasz
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Lukasz Walterowicz
Date: 12/9/2011 5:54:00 PM
Thanks once again, Bob!
Date: 12/9/2011 11:40:00 AM
Congrats on your win Lukasz. Love, Carol
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Lukasz Walterowicz
Date: 12/9/2011 5:55:00 PM
Thank you Carol for the second time!
Date: 12/8/2011 9:04:00 AM
Nice flow to your beauty of words on poetic sequence, Lukasz. Congrats on your worthy win. Agape, Moses
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Lukasz Walterowicz
Date: 12/9/2011 9:29:00 AM
Thank you for your appreciation, John. This was a pleasant surprise for me, since this poem was written within 2 minutes during a break between classes at university. =)
Date: 12/7/2011 5:54:00 PM
Congratulations on the winners' list, Lucasz.
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Lukasz Walterowicz
Date: 12/7/2011 6:14:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea!
Date: 12/7/2011 1:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Lukasz
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Lukasz Walterowicz
Date: 12/7/2011 5:38:00 PM
Thank you, Bob.
Date: 12/7/2011 1:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Moses' "Beautiful" contest Lukasz. Love, Carol
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Lukasz Walterowicz
Date: 12/7/2011 5:38:00 PM
Thanks Carol, I appreciate that.
Date: 12/7/2011 12:56:00 PM
Lukasz congrats on your win..David
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Lukasz Walterowicz
Date: 12/7/2011 5:39:00 PM
Thank you, David.

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