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Astronomer

Stone steps To the top of the tower - At least a hundred - In a spiral staircase; Regularly spaced, Worn by many feet And time, Yet as strong as the day They were quarried Out of local granite. Taking the polished brass Handrail, I started to climb; Eventually, Stopping midway To catch my breath, And massage my aching calves. Reaching the telescope at last, I Smiled and gazed up at the starry sky. Jack Horne for Linda-Marie’s contest

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Date: 2/28/2012 5:00:00 PM
Magnifcent result Jack congrats..
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Date: 2/27/2012 5:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's "Stairway To The Stars" contest Jack. Love Carol
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Date: 2/26/2012 6:38:00 AM
Congrats to you jack.Very good Acrostic by you.
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Date: 2/26/2012 3:13:00 AM
Congratulations Jack, enjoyed this, well done xx
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Date: 2/25/2012 5:57:00 PM
I loved this the first time I saw it. Congrats on your well deserved win, Jack.
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Date: 2/25/2012 4:10:00 PM
Congrats Jack on a great win for this tremendous write and entry luv.. and thankxx for your constant support too..
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Date: 2/22/2012 11:06:00 AM
Awesome acrostic, Jack. I haven't seen this contest, but you provided a compelling image of the astronomer climbing to the top of the tower so he could use the telescope. (I once saw the Horsehead Nebula through a telescope -- awesome site!) Wishing you success in Linda's contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/22/2012 9:24:00 AM
What wonderful poetry you all are sharing with us today. I have enjoyed reading yours today Jack. I hope the rest of the week finds you with much inspiration in your heart and you will continue to share your writing. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/21/2012 9:00:00 PM
Jack... Linda, will love your entry... I sure did.,.. Have yourself a good night, always* PD
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Date: 2/21/2012 7:56:00 PM
wow, it's the stairway to the stars contest and what a GREAT idea how you did your entry. I LOVE It. I would like to see the first letter of each line accentuated to show off the acrostic it spells!! Thanks for all your comments today, Jack.
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Date: 2/21/2012 4:21:00 PM
Reads like a winner..Enjoyed reading this eve..Yes, going to a Planetarium to observe the stars, ah, that would be great..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for all the kind reviews of my work..Sara
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