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Astrid

A woman in a fairy world, made from human dreams Goddess fair, conceived and born in the time of love Bound to a place of whispering breeze and moonbeams Voice as soft and gentle and the coo of the gray dove... Came the time of summer frolic and gay delight And in her gleeful wandering she paused to see Her filmy beauty reflected in a woodland pool Surrounded by the purple rose and cinnamon tree... Amazed to see within the pool her quiet twin Her every motion a study of pure synchronicity Their fingers touched on one drop of water blue Ivory wings folded in a moment for pure serenity... Lovely Astrid tarried there until shadows crept Entranced by the fluid smile on that shadow face Finally bound by the magic of that glassy world She slept, one hand dipped in that watery place.... For Constance's Reflection contest Barbara Gorelick

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Date: 3/2/2011 11:49:00 AM
Congratulations Barbara on your fine win in Constance's wonderful contest....:)
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Date: 2/28/2011 7:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Barbara in Constance's contest "Reflection". Love, Carol
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Date: 2/27/2011 11:45:00 AM
Congrats on your win with this wonderful piece. I enjoyed the read. Caryl
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Date: 2/26/2011 4:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 2/26/2011 3:58:00 PM
Truly lovely BarbaraCongratulaions. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/26/2011 10:56:00 AM
Congrats BG on your wonderful win in the Reflections contest ... so happy to be sharing the winners list with u luv...
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Date: 2/26/2011 7:36:00 AM
Beautiful job Barbara, good to see you at the top again. Congratulations on your worthy poem's third place honor in Constance's inspiring contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/26/2011 5:50:00 AM
Dear Barbara, Congratulations on a well deserved 3rd place win in Constance's Contest " Reflection " YOUR words so gripping " made from human dreams " YOU have a beautiful way with words Teach me to write POETRY LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER, YOUR Liege...HG
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Date: 2/26/2011 12:23:00 AM
Barbara, I just knew this would be a winner. Congratulations, lady!
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Date: 2/25/2011 10:40:00 PM
warm wishes on the success here Barbara & all the best for the future.
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Date: 2/25/2011 7:57:00 PM
BG This is superb with lovely images. Many congratulations for this big win.
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Date: 2/25/2011 6:20:00 PM
Congrats Barbara!Wonderful story you have penned here----kashinath
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Date: 2/25/2011 5:42:00 PM
Congratulations on the third place win in the contest of Constance, Barbara
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Date: 2/25/2011 5:22:00 PM
Just as I expected the first time I read this. Your entry was chosen as a winner. Congratulations Barbara.
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Date: 2/24/2011 6:34:00 PM
lLVery nice Barbara. I think it will do well. Thanks for your comments on my myth entry. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/23/2011 10:17:00 PM
You described it exactly, Barbara! Lovely name for this sweet woman too. I loved the purple rose and cinnamon tree line!
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Date: 2/23/2011 12:04:00 PM
great write here Barbara, i wish you all the best in the contest with this worthy entry.
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Date: 2/22/2011 4:40:00 AM
Well written poem for Constance's contest! Best of luck with this one, Barbara!...All the best!....Gert
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Date: 2/21/2011 7:55:00 AM
Barbara, You are so gifted in writing about mystical things! Favorite parts are your description of her voice and the moment their fingers touched...ivory wings folded in a moment for pure serenity. Gorgeous adjectives!
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Date: 2/19/2011 5:20:00 PM
A beautiful write Barbara! Picture perfect! I enjoyed the read. Caryl
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Date: 2/19/2011 4:03:00 PM
Beautiful, Barbara! I saw "wings" in the pool as well. This narrative could have been written by Constance and I'm sure she'll love it. Wishing you success as always. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/19/2011 9:05:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest.
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Date: 2/19/2011 8:31:00 AM
Oh.....wow..this is magnificent, Barbara. Seems like a fairy tale that I would love to read to my grand daughter!
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Date: 2/19/2011 7:54:00 AM
Constance should like this entry for her contest. Barbara, you have your usual great descriptiveness and rhyming in this presentation.
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