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Associate Destiny

"associate destiny" ~as broken dreams offer new life themes… Beauty contemplates heaven’s gate. ~past conflicts offer new schemes… as broken dreams offer new life themes. ~fact or foible awaits in dreams… awaiting to shape the human fate. ~as broken dreams offer new life themes… Beauty contemplates heaven’s gate. For and In Honor of Nette Onclaud And contest; “In The Afterglow” by John Moses Freeman

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/15/2011 3:14:00 PM

Creative work very expressive...Congrats on your win..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/15/2011 10:34:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Nette's "In The Afterglow" contest Moses. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/15/2011 6:49:00 AM

congrats. moe.. you wowed me.. come visit my shadorma poem; have an incite for you! :) huggs, nette

Nette Onclaud
Date: 8/15/2011 6:50:00 AM

*invite*

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/14/2011 8:31:00 PM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette,John

Nancy Jones

Date: 8/14/2011 8:29:00 PM

new themes and beauty... keep us runnin' eh? Interesting write, Moses, thanks and congrats!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/14/2011 7:35:00 PM

excellent use of the form! Congrad's Light & Love

Don Johnson

Date: 8/14/2011 7:05:00 PM

fact or foible are the words, well done here mate, yes my word, me rhyme slipped off me slate? well done mate.

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/14/2011 6:04:00 PM

Love the positive message, this is lovely, John! Congratulations!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/14/2011 4:17:00 PM

Congrats Moses on third place win in Nette's contest with this exquisite entry my friend..luv..

Sidney Beck

Date: 8/14/2011 3:54:00 PM

very nice interpretation John....there is hope for this seemingly hopeless girl...I like the viewpoint....my congratulations and best wishes

Don Johnson

Date: 8/9/2011 8:46:00 AM

fact n foible drafts you mobile, in or out the judgement gate, wait till peters at the store, then you get in mate... great poem cobber, Don

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 8/8/2011 11:03:00 PM

Hard realities with Beauty and creativeness reflect very strongly in this wonderful write my friend. The Poem is much deeper than it looks in the first read. Great write. My good wishes for your contest entry and thank you once again for appreciating my poem 'When one sing a song or dance’ and for your good wishes. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra...John Freeman

Robert Johnson

Date: 8/8/2011 3:26:00 PM

Beautifully wrapped and ribboned.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/8/2011 2:21:00 PM

It is learning to separate "fact" from "foible" that seems to be difficult sometimes, John. Wanted to read this one again and thank you for my placement in your contest. Love, Carolyn

Joseph Osita

Date: 8/7/2011 3:33:00 PM

"Beauty contemplates heaven's gate" What an amazing picture this line presents. Very beautiful and well penned! I'm sure this is gonna be a winner in the contest. Best wishes,my dear John

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/7/2011 2:01:00 PM

Excellent, John! I've seen many great entries for Nete's contest and yours is definitely one of the best. Wishing you succcess. It may have been G. who hacked my computer. I changed my password and hope this solves the problem. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/5/2011 11:16:00 AM

Soup Mail!!!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/5/2011 7:35:00 AM

Wishing you the best in the contest Moses with this remarkable piece. Love, Carol I posted a poem and went to enter it in your contest and it is closed wow that was fast.

Chiquitachiamaka Baity

Date: 8/5/2011 4:13:00 AM

BeautifullyWritten John....It looks like a Winner!!!!Best of Luck In the Contest!!!!!

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 8/5/2011 12:35:00 AM

This one looks likely to be a winner..very interesting images..thanx for your kind comments, jag

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/4/2011 10:14:00 PM

You did well with the form, john. A good way to do the afterglow theme. I am completely stumped on this one, at least for now. Love your final repeating line of this one.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/4/2011 7:05:00 PM

Enjoyed reading this one..Good luck in the contest..Broken dreams are not a happy thing but sometimes they help us grow..Thanks for stopping by my blog and entering my contest "Low Country Boil"...Some dogs do have an allergy to flea bites..I got something called Comfortis at the vet's it is a pill for fleas..Five came off her the day after the pill and I have not seen but two more fleas..I have cats and Rocky had been inside the house and we fought fleas with him..Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/4/2011 7:06:00 PM

So I did the pill with her first thing so that she would not have them..The cats stay outside and I put drops on them but they go off and get fleas from other cats..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/4/2011 6:43:00 PM

such brilliance in these beautiful lines Moses my friend.. a tender portrait painted as to the decision of the woman on the tracks.. good luck in the contest luv..

Kash Poet

Date: 8/4/2011 2:58:00 PM

Beautiful poem John.Very thoughtfully penned....a great entry for the contest.Best wishes.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/4/2011 1:08:00 PM

Nice take on the contest,John